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Gifted
It\'s a feeling in my head I can\'t translate.
Something...
Gnawing...
Fingers brushing the back of my neck
Shivers down my spine.
I turn.
...
Nothing.
Not again.
I start rocking.
rocking.
rocking.
rocking.
rocking.
rocking.
pause.
I used to be a writer.
It\'s a feeling in my head I can\'t translate.
Something...
Gnawing...
Fingers brushing the back of my neck
Shivers down my spine.
I turn.
...
Nothing.
Not again.
I start rocking.
rocking.
rocking.
rocking.
rocking.
rocking.
pause.
I used to be a writer.
my first poem for a while, thought I'd try a new style...
maybe it's short enough that you'll bother reading it too... maybe not.
maybe it's short enough that you'll bother reading it too... maybe not.
© 2003 - 2024 syrus
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It's an great structure, and the images are good. I love the use of repetition, it fits well with the rocking.
Good stuff
Good stuff