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mindseye
the eyes are there
they look at me
percieve my mind
then cease to be
the voices there
inside they play
deliver me
unto their way
the feelings there
in back of mind
the point of which
I'm yet to find
feelings are
decieving things
illusions, pain
contrived within
the eyes are there
they look at me
percieve my mind
then cease to be
the voices there
inside they play
deliver me
unto their way
the feelings there
in back of mind
the point of which
I'm yet to find
feelings are
decieving things
illusions, pain
contrived within
one I did a while back... it's not too bad, I suppose
© 2002 - 2024 syrus
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seems not quite done? pretty good i like it when people dont seme like theyre trying to be something they arent you seem true in this one.. keep it up